Stories past and present

Back in July last year I started my first story on DA called "Ultimate physical control", then I stopped. The problem is that the story was really just a dump of a series of thoughts I'd had and I had no idea how to progress the plot and make it coherent. I've been through various possibilities in my head but, until recently, they didn't quite work. So there the story sat with no idea how to move it on.

I now have a much clearer idea of what I want to do with it but it's been a while since I wrote it so I need to go back and reread it to make sure what I want to do with it is consistent.

In the meantime, I've written another story. This time I decided to complete the story before publishing. I've done that now and will post it once I've finished this journal entry. I hope someone in my small pool of followers enjoys it and I would appreciate any feedback.

The story is based on a Taiji (or Tai Chi) class. I know a little about Taiji but please don't expect an accurate description. I have deliberately avoided mentioning any particular school. It also delves deeply into a fantasy world which has nothing to do with the reality of Taiji itself. If you are a Taiji practitioner and are offended by this, I can only offer my apologies, but bear in mind it is a piece of fiction. It is also erotic, although no sex is involved.